Learn to Think Like a Storyteller

You’ve poured your heart into your manuscript. You’ve studied craft, revised, and maybe even worked with editors before. But something still isn’t clicking.

Your story has potential—but right now, it’s not sellable.

What’s Missing?

The problem isn’t that you don’t know enough about storytelling—it’s that no one has shown you how to actually implement that knowledge.

Most feedback is vague and unhelpful: “Raise the stakes,” “add more conflict,” “deepen character motivation.”

But how do you actually do that?

That’s where I come in.

How a Developmental Edit Will Help You

  • Turn your draft into a compelling novel

    We’ll refine your plot, pacing, character arcs, and emotional impact.

  • Understand why your story isn’t working and how to fix it.

    No more rewriting aimlessly—I’ll pinpoint exactly where the weak spots are and how to strengthen them.

  • Learn how to implement feedback effectively.

    I won’t just tell you what’s wrong—I’ll show you how to make it right.

  • Gain confidence in your storytelling skills.

    By the end of this process, you won’t just have a better manuscript—you’ll know how to problem-solve in future drafts, too.

What’s Included in This Package?

A Full Manuscript Evaluation – I’ll analyze your novel’s structure, pacing, character arcs, and overall execution.

A Detailed Editorial Letter – You’ll receive a comprehensive breakdown of what’s working, what’s not, and how to elevate your story.

Scene-Level Feedback – Notes directly in your manuscript to show where things go wrong and how to fix them.

Implementation Guidance – Actionable suggestions so you’re not left guessing how to apply the feedback.

1-on-1 Support – A follow-up call to discuss revisions and answer any questions.

Where You’ll Be After This Edit

You’ll have a stronger, more polished manuscript that’s ready for the next step—whether that’s querying agents or preparing for self-publishing.

You’ll understand your own writing on a deeper level, so you can confidently tackle revisions in the future.

You’ll know how to fix problems in your drafts instead of getting stuck in endless rewrites.

You’ll walk away empowered, confident, and ready to move forward with your book.

Timeline & Investment

Duration: 1 -2 months (varies depending on word count)
Investment: $2,000

Ready to transform your manuscript—and your writing skills?