Learn to Think Like a Storyteller

Revision Doesn’t Have To Be A Black Hole.

Full manuscript revisions or developmental edits are where good drafts become great.
But for most writers, it’s also where momentum dies.

You get stuck. You get overwhelmed. You second-guess everything.
Not because you’re a bad writer—but because you’ve been taught to revise the wrong way.

The Traditional Revision Approach…

Asks you to hand over your manuscript—and your power—to someone else.
It pushes you into line edits before your story is ready.
And it never shows you how to actually solve the deeper problems.

That puts you in a position where you’re set up to fail.

But here’s the truth

You’re not failing. The system is.

The fix? A revision process that teaches you how to think like a storyteller.
The solution? Revision Mentorship

How Revision Mentorship Helps You

  • We start by creating an “As-Is” outline—a clear map of what’s actually on the page (not just what you hoped you wrote). This step helps us identify where the story is working, where it’s not, and why.

    That is where you’ll learn to see your manuscript with fresh eyes and pinpoint the issues holding it back.

  • Next, we create a blueprint for your revision. We’ll brainstorm solutions and create a “Next Steps” outline that provides a clear, customized plan for what needs to change—and how to make it happen.

    This is where you stop guessing at solutions and start crafting compelling fixes that elevate your story.

  • Now, it’s time to implement. With your plan in hand, you’ll know what to fix, when to fix it, and why.

What You’ll Get

A Complete Revision Map tailored to your unique story.

A Process that can be repeated for every story.

A mentor who will be in the trenches with you.

Clarity on what to fix, how to fix it, and the order to do it in.

Real progress - not just in your story but in your skills as a storyteller.

Invest In Yourself

Price: $3,000

Revision Mentorship isn’t about fixing the problem for you. It’s about giving you the power to fix it yourself - so next time, you won’t get stuck.

Ready to become the writer you want to be?