Master the Building Blocks of Your Novel - One Scene at a Time

Writing a novel is a huge undertaking.

You’ve got a story in your heart, but turning it into a compelling, page-turning manuscript? That’s where the real challenge begins.

Maybe you’ve written draft after draft, but something still feels off. Maybe you’ve studied writing craft, but when it comes time to apply it, you’re stuck. Or maybe you’re just tired of getting vague feedback that tells you to “add more tension” without showing you how.

That’s where I come in.

With my One-on-One Scene Writing Coaching, we won’t just get your novel written—we’ll make sure every scene works.

How This Coaching Will Help You

This isn’t just about finishing your book. It’s about building the skills that will make you a stronger, more confident writer—not just for this novel, but for every book you write after.

Through this process, you will:


  • Write a Novel

    With expert guidance, we’ll build your story one scene at a time. We won't move forward until each scene has the key element that keeps readers hooked: narrative drive.

  • Get Hands-on coaching

    Coaching with me isn’t just feedback or vague advice. I’ll break down exactly what’s not working and show you how to fix it, giving you concrete tools to implement

  • Accelerate Your Growth

    Since we’re refining your scenes as we go, you’ll internalize what makes a scene work—so you can write stronger drafts faster in the future.

  • Skip the Overwhelming Full-Manuscript Revision Process

    By addressing issues at the scene level, you won’t need massive rewrites later. Instead, you’ll have a manuscript ready to go to querying by the time we’re done.


What’s Included in this Coaching Package?

  • Every scene in your novel will be carefully evaluated to ensure it engages readers and creates narrative drive. We’ll focus on:
    ✔ Plot Structure – Crafting a meaningful arc of change that keeps the momentum strong.
    ✔ Character Goals – Clarifying motivations so readers connect deeply with your protagonist.
    ✔ Conflict & Stakes – Raising tension to make each scene compelling.
    ✔ Exposition & World-Building – Finding the right balance between intrigue and pacing.
    ✔ Dialogue – Ensuring conversations feel natural, purposeful, and engaging.

  • No vague advice—just practical, step-by-step guidance. You'll receive detailed feedback through personalized Loom video critiques, where I walk you through what’s working, what needs improvement, and exactly how to implement changes. This allows you to see and hear the reasoning behind each suggestion, making revisions clearer and more effective.

  • After every round of feedback, we’ll meet to discuss:

    ✔What resonates with you.

    ✔What doesn’t resonate with you.

    ✔ The best next steps for your story.

    ✔Any questions you have.

    These calls ensure your vision stays at the center of the process while giving you the support and clarity to move forward with confidence.

What You Will Walk Away With

  • A Finished Manuscript

    You’ll leave with a book that’s ready for querying or self-publishing - without the need for extensive rewrites.

  • A Transformational Learning Experience

    You won’t just finish a book - you’ll leave this process as a stronger, more skilled writer, equipped to tackle future projects with confidence and clarity.

  • A Deep Understanding of Scene Structure and Narrative Drive

    You’ll never second-guess what makes a scene work again.

  • Tangible Proof of Your Growth as a Writer

    No more wondering if you’re improving. You’ll see the results in your work.

  • A Sense of Pride and Confidence

    In both your story and your abilities, you’ll feel the zing of pride! You’ll know that you’ve put in the work, built your skills, and created something you’re proud of.

Invest in Yourself

$500/month or $3,000 for the first 6 months